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A few of my songs


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Some of my old stuff...

mms://wwwstaff.murdoch.edu.au/~bjones/wma/dreamtek.wma

mms://wwwstaff.murdoch.edu.au/~bjones/wma/breathe.wma

Any feed back would really be appreciated...

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Think "Breathe" wouldn't be out of tune on the next Mezzanine de l'Alcazar compilation.  ;D

A real sax would be nice!

I had expected the bass to kick in around :46, but instead it gets into gear too slowly imho. The bassline really drives it from 1:58 on. The 808 style drum sounds a bit too harsh and centered, or maybe that's because the sound of that wma compression is so horrible  :-/

Maybe you could try some more rythmic variation with the hats?

cheers!

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