first song - please comment

[dj3nk]

Hi this is my first song, it's not ready yet, but I wanted to ask you to write me a comment. Please let me hear your critics and ideas for this song too !

Hope you like it.

http://download.yousendit.com/AFA772D560358FDB

[MTE]

no Bassline no comment :P

no for your 1st try its good arranged...put in a fluffy bassline for a base footing ;)

[Sasha]

I like the sound at the beginning. Panning is too hard I thing, could be minimised bit. Which I really dont like is  the sound of snare. Must be replaced. Bass is energy so it is hard to say much without it, but it is perspective track. Work on it.  ;)

[Vinyljunkie]

hey guy, file is down.  ;D

please reupload, i want to see it